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ankles, of course-
sharp and constant
not throbbing, just there and
traveling up, up to my knees and
when it rains, my hips: oh
my hips, when they hurt
they really hurt, and i can't hardly walk
son of a bitch
the pain.
wrists, too, always crackling and
cricking and pinching the nerve-
carpal tunnel, gotta love it.
elbows-
okay.
shoulders need popping
cracking
twisting, just gotta
loosen the joint, relax tense muscles and-
god dammit
stiffness
can't move.
neck, twisting in all the wrong angles, with
cracking joints and vertebrae
just for the ability to tur-
immobile, again: my
head will face left for hours; just
where'd my heating pad go?
and my head? Don't
even
get
me
started.
sharp and constant
not throbbing, just there and
traveling up, up to my knees and
when it rains, my hips: oh
my hips, when they hurt
they really hurt, and i can't hardly walk
son of a bitch
the pain.
wrists, too, always crackling and
cricking and pinching the nerve-
carpal tunnel, gotta love it.
elbows-
okay.
shoulders need popping
cracking
twisting, just gotta
loosen the joint, relax tense muscles and-
god dammit
stiffness
can't move.
neck, twisting in all the wrong angles, with
cracking joints and vertebrae
just for the ability to tur-
immobile, again: my
head will face left for hours; just
where'd my heating pad go?
and my head? Don't
even
get
me
started.
full title: the side-effects of living an adventure-filled life
I have no idea if this is really concrete poetry, but there was nothing else I could put it into. (And yes, it is humorous. To me, at least.)
Basically, this is a list of (almost) everything that hurts in my body. My poetry teacher had us make a poem that was a list of whatever we wanted, and this was the first thing I came up with. There are a few things I left out--such as my jaw, and my back--but these are all the ones that cause me the most grief. It's just something fun.
I have no idea if this is really concrete poetry, but there was nothing else I could put it into. (And yes, it is humorous. To me, at least.)
Basically, this is a list of (almost) everything that hurts in my body. My poetry teacher had us make a poem that was a list of whatever we wanted, and this was the first thing I came up with. There are a few things I left out--such as my jaw, and my back--but these are all the ones that cause me the most grief. It's just something fun.
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Hey, epic title you got there~ XD